Shortcuts are tempting. Therein lies the appeal of the cliché—one familiar phrase can make a general point that might otherwise take paragraphs to explain. And while nuance may be lost, efficiency is gained. For trial lawyers who are pressed for time during motion practice, making a point by cliché might seem like the simplest and most effective way to convey their message. But using clichés in legal writing can be a risky business.

Clichés cause trouble when they are used in lieu of reasoned analysis. For example, a lawyer might describe a piece of evidence as the “smoking gun” without taking the time to explain why that evidence satisfies each and every disputed element of the claim. By using shorthand to convey that the evidence is dispositive, the lawyer fails to provide the trial court with a roadmap for granting whatever relief is sought. This means either that the trial court must come up with its own reasoned analysis to support relief—and it rarely behooves a person to make the court do extra work—or that the court will simply adopt the same shorthand the trial lawyer used to justify the result.